Summer Camp

The campers sat together. The flames, casting eery shadows, jumped and crackled in the breeze. All of them were on edge after the terrible news they had received. Every little noise caused their hearts to race. Tracy was really missing. Everyone thought she had gone to her cabin to be alone, but when she didn't show up for dinner they began to worry. There was no sign of her anywhere around camp. She was the fifth camper to go missing in just over a week. The campers looked around the fire at each other wondering who would be next.

8 comments:

  1. Ooh, 5 campers have gone missing and they just sit round the fire? What's going on? You've got me intrigued.

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  2. Well, they're taking it very well. Would like to know what's happening.

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  3. Blimey when is someone going to sort it??? This is intriguing and atmospheric, I like it!

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  4. Oh my goodness! I need to know what happens next. I love the way you used the prompt - very clever! Now - get writing the next part!

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  5. Wow, you set up quite a lot of suspense in a few short words! I'm curious about what happens next.

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  6. A great camp fire story. All the elements of
    suspense were wovern throughout. I would enjoy
    reading more. Well done on the challenge.
    Isadora

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  7. super! as a child, you'd just sit and wait to see what is next...:) well done!

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  8. They don't happen to be at Camp Crystal Lake, do they? :)
    Quite a spooky use of this week's prompt. Well done!

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